ext_85292 ([identity profile] marctic.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] drewbear 2008-06-14 04:04 pm (UTC)

I really liked it :) I like how you started out with the "emergency" at your job- very subtle. The riot at the supermarket was some fine writing sir.
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